Monday, July 26, 2010

Chapter 8 - Pic Tease & Chapter Teaser

Chapter 8


She heard a noise and flashed her eyes towards the door. A tall woman with deep red hair stood there, staring at her. Bella felt a chill run down her spine as the woman's cold blue eyes bored into hers.

"He'll never be yours," she spoke in a beautiful, lilting voice as she took a step towards Bella.

Bella's heart started hammering in her chest and she felt sweat break out on her forehead.

"You can't have him back. You left him!" Bella yelled at the woman. "Get out of my house!"

She caught a movement out of the corner of her eye and saw Jack standing in the corner of the room. The woman followed Bella's gaze and cocked her head to the side.

"Jackson?" she called and held her hand out. Jack walked obediently over to her, without sparing Bella another glance. They turned and started to walk out of the room.

"NO!" Bella screamed. "Victoria, no! Don't take my son!"



  1. This is totally a dream. Oh, it better be. lol I don't think my heart can take it if it's real, that's just cruel :). Really looking forward to this chapter. I assume that whatever happens here will set the tone for the rest of the story. Gosh, I am a wreck trying to imagine the scenarios. ;)

    Hmmm... point of fact, if Victoria is still around and she meets Bella, I cannot imagine Bella taking this fight lying down. I clearly remember Bella having violent thoughts toward the woman most likely responsible for what happened to Jack.

    Great teaser. I really is a tease. lol

  2. Thanks Nautica, you've calmed me down, I was about to have a freak out... I hope it was just a nightmare too.

    Jack looks adoreable in his pick.


    x x

  3. LOL! You guys are awesome!

    The pic actually goes hand-in-hand with the review teaser.