Ok, sorry that this isn't Parachute related. Well, it sort of is. My O/S, The Cake Boss won one of the Judge's Choice in the Lovin' in the Oven contest.
It was my first time writing lemon, which is essentially practice for some citrusy things to come later on in Parachute.
If you guys want to check it out and critique it, that's awesome. I handle constructive criticism very well!